Comment And Critics For friend's Story..~ = . ='

- sense the mysterious element in this paragraph.

-attract me to reads more to know how this story ends.

-The words and style of writing makes me easy to read. simple .

-Love how he wrote bout village peoples like "Yes, I'm agreed with you Abu, let the city boy do what he capable of...".. - look down on people -..

- this story can be impr0ve in order to make it more interesting and more sense of mystery~

- Should elaborate the idea of the story to make it more attractive

-In scale 1 - 10 , I give him 7~