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I was at this bar as usual and we were playing “have you met my man thing” with the help of my wingman which is my best friends. There was this girl. She looks so hot in the way she stood in front of us, dressing like a corporate woman. She acts like a nice girl with a nice job. There we go when Barney approaching her at the back and say “had you met my friend Ted?” and he left me with this girl. I am actually attracted to her by the way she looking. Barney said she is a hooker but I strongly argue with that fact. I bet she was the nice girl, the one that I waited for a long time. The one who gonna be my soul mate and a few days later we were dating for first time and after I all for her, my best friend Barney stop by my place and told me something that I would never think about it. I thought she is a nice person at all but all of my thought about her was wrong. She is so mean and like to toys with other people feeling. “ohh damn..How could I fall to that kind of woman. I bet good looks are not the best way to judge people and that sucks”. She is a whore, hooker and prostitute like Barney said earlier. That night I went to search her at her work place and guess what I saw? She is really what Barney told me that evening. Somehow that kind off hurts me inside. So, I end up my day in alley that night beaten by some punks who trying to rob me. The feeling of loss is double. I lost the girl that I fallen to and more importantly I lost the money that him gonna use to buy the latest ipad. That really sucks and this day has been put in my “Hall Of Misery Days Moment.” I locked myself for few days in my room, making my all of my friends worried about me but I am in terrible condition right now. Thinking that I am fall in love with a hooker? That gross.
 The next day, i finally out of my room and that make all my friends happy a kind of bit. Barney still making fun of me that im being love with a hooker but who cares? Luckily for me i still have my friends around. It is better than having a hooker by my side all the time. 

Comment And Critics For friend's Story..~ = . ='

- sense the mysterious element in this paragraph.

-attract me to reads more to know how this story ends.

-The words and style of writing makes me easy to read. simple .

-Love how he wrote bout village peoples like "Yes, I'm agreed with you Abu, let the city boy do what he capable of...".. - look down on people -..

- this story can be impr0ve in order to make it more interesting and more sense of mystery~

- Should elaborate the idea of the story to make it more attractive

-In scale 1 - 10 , I give him 7~

Short Paragraph..~

Krinnggggggg..!!! The break time is on at Nikogaku High School. Class 2-D is always full of energy. All delinquents of 2nd year students were placed in that class but among them there is one guy who crazy enough to take the role of "Head of Monster Class". That is Endo Kenji, red-haired, tall and strong but never used any of this advantage for good purpose.Today he was going to confess his love to Haruko in front of crowd in the dining hall because he lose bet to his good friend who is also the member of class D, Akira. On his way to the dining hall,he walk pass the basketball court and he see how hard the captain of team training by himself. " pftt..What a crazy gorilla to play ball alone under the sun..hahaha!!" Kenji shouts but he is ignored by Shinjo. This two big shot at Nikogaku always been enemies since their set their foot on this school turf because for Kenji, Shinjo is the only man who can fight with him equally. As Kenji walk pass the court, he met Akira who is smiling at that time. " are u ready to confess to Haruko?" ask Akira. "Dont u have any other challenge for me, The Head Monster to do?hahahha It's an easy task" answer Kenji....And A few minutes after, Kenji turned into laughing object because he was turned down by Haruko aggressively and get laughed by other student in the dining hall....... He got himself a new nickname which is " Red-Haired Monkey" by Akira and for the result Akira was beaten by Kenji...........  and so other male students in the dining hall who laughed at him earlier..

Character..

Endo Kenji is the protagonist of Rookies- the beginning-. At the beginning, Kenji is a slacker, good for nothing other than fighting. Kenji was always trying to ask girls out, but was rejected constantly, the 50th rejection occurring at the start of the story. He then met Yagi Touko, a lovely basketball fan girl, whom he fell in love with immediately. This and Touko's encouragement led to him to join the Nikogaku basketball team. However, as a complete beginner, he was not able to keep up with the rest of the team at first despite his height, athleticism, stamina, speed and leaping ability. He regards himself as a genius though, with self-confidence that borders on arrogance. Kenji's most recognizable trait is his red hair, though he shaves his head as reparation for an error that led to a loss in the Interhigh Tournament against Megurugawa. He has a habit of making fun of other players by giving them various nicknames, such as calling Shinjo "gorilla". At first, Kenji was known for his poor basketball skills as a beginner and in his first official matches, fouled out every game. However, his basketball skills advanced by hard training. First he developed his basic skills, such as dribbling and layups. Then, trained by Shinjo, he became a formidable rebounder, with his rebounding becoming his claim to fame throughout the latter half of the series. His jump shooting was then developed by Coach Kawato, who had him make 20,000 shots in a week. However, he also injured his back during the match against Housen when saving the ball from going off the court, and underwent rehabilitation after Nikogaku's subsequent loss to Aiwa Academy. While considered by most to be an amateur's instinctual tactic, the tactic itself, coupled with Kenji's formidable athleticism actually goes well with his somewhat unorthodox playing style. This allows Kenji to be in the right place at the right time to intercept more experienced players. In spite of the setbacks he has had to face, Kenji displays a great deal of tenacity and determination that carry him through and help reciprocate for his other failings, both on and off the court. Although his love for Touko and rivalry with Shinichi are the main driving forces motivating him to succeed in basketball, his injury during the Housen match makes him realize that he has actually come to love the game, leading him to give his all for his team and bring them victory.

Meow² Free Verse

On the dark desert highway
no where else to go
trying to find the land of joy
as if no hope left

He saw a shimmering light
shines through the dark road
as if there is place to stop by
in the end it doesnt even matter

He saw a path glows in the night
a path that leads to land of freedom
the land that cannot be found
not for those who seek it

Over the path is full of tears n joys
overwhelms the dark and spooky road
cries laughs and shouts heard
in the end it doesnt even matter

He overcome all of dangers
in order to find this precious land
does not matter what will happen next
cause hes found his land of light


                                                                  © Nazren ~2011 All Right Reserve

Poems~~@@!!~~

ripple cripple your heart was

to the land of meaningless

to the heart and soul

that contains sorrow and sadness


in search of freedom and eternity

satisfy the heart and the needs

to the place that entertains

the heart that contains,


the heart in the turmoil

getting deeper and deeper

trying to find the way out,but

only full of sorrow and sadness


walk and run towards destiny

in search of something meaningful

and what needs to fill his heart

that is woman and love


for the trust and loyalty

he gave himself to her,but

all he gets just pains

he being betrayed once again.

Hello And Welcome

first of all thanks to my friends because always helping me to catch up what im missing..

actually i dunno what to write for my 1st entry..

im not a blogger so i dunno much about blog or this kind of thing..

thats all for now! thanks